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Sitawi
Jun 27, 2009 17:25:00 GMT -5
Post by PoLyMoRpHiC on Jun 27, 2009 17:25:00 GMT -5
GRINS- XD its awesome tat -huggles- Maybe to spice things up a bit more in the Baya life, Sitawi has a crush on Niara, and always does hid best to impress her, obviously she isnt interested cz of Jasiri, but no one knows about that. Maybe Sitawi is the only male that Katili sees as being good enough for his daughter, and he tries to force her to be Sitawi's mate, only wanting her to get the best out of life, then at that point she comes out with she's preggers, she then has to explain everything reluctantly, he father is beyond angry and goes to find Jasiri to try and kill him, Sitawi is jealous and he too tries to find Jasiri to kill him. Maybe Niara has to then find Jasiri before her father and Sitawi do, and stop the fight....
just an idea, trying to spice things up XD
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Sitawi
Jun 27, 2009 20:02:18 GMT -5
Post by Tattered on Jun 27, 2009 20:02:18 GMT -5
Thank-you, thank-you~
I like most of the idea, but maybe Sitawi doesn't exactly have a crush on her. Those sort of feelings are foreign to him. Instead, what if he hates her with a passion because Katili is always trying to get them together. He becomes even more angry because Niara hadn't really done anything to deserve such treatment. So he's angry with her all the time because deep inside he doesn't want to face the fact she might deserve respect.
And when he and Katili find out about Jasiri, what if Sitawi has to go because I think this is about the time Katili disappears. Unless it’s after she has the cubs and he returns. So if that is the case, Katili sends Sitawi to kill Jasiri. And what if for a while, everyone believes he succeeded. If Niara believes he is dead, what if Sitawi really begins to see her more compassionate side and Then begins to have a crush on her.
So it’d be either tell her the truth to make her happy or really kill Jasiri and keep the secret a secret so he may have her. Or something like that.
Is this any good?
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Sitawi
Jun 27, 2009 20:14:44 GMT -5
Post by PoLyMoRpHiC on Jun 27, 2009 20:14:44 GMT -5
no i like it, ok, so katili keeps trying ot get Niara and Sitawi together, Niara gets fed up with it and tell him she is preggers, katili goes mad and wants to kill Jasiri, but how about instead of Jasiri getting killed, we do a lion king sorta thing, and he dissapears for a long time so everyone believes he is dead, this is around the same time katili dissapears. With her father missing and her lover 'dead' Niara is forced to move on, she is alone when she starts to give birth, but maybe Sitawi sees her in pain and starts to feel sorry for her and stays with her for reasurance...
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Sitawi
Jun 27, 2009 20:20:11 GMT -5
Post by Tattered on Jun 27, 2009 20:20:11 GMT -5
That's fine. I didn't mean to kill Jasiri, I would never do that. Just he'd disappear after Sitawi threatened him to stay away, many believing Jasiri to be dead. Only, Sitawi was the only one who knew the truth. But this is fine. Until he really sees Niara in pain or compassion, Sitawi hides behind his anger. This okay?
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Sitawi
Jun 27, 2009 20:26:06 GMT -5
Post by PoLyMoRpHiC on Jun 27, 2009 20:26:06 GMT -5
no no no, thats awesome! so katili orders sitawi to kill Jasiri, but instead he only threatens him to leave, so jasiri dissapears, and many believe he is dead, except sitawi. ok i got it XD
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Sitawi
Jun 27, 2009 20:32:40 GMT -5
Post by Tattered on Jun 27, 2009 20:32:40 GMT -5
Yup'ppers~ I am glad you thought of a plot. We do so well working together~ And it's a great way to add character growth. You know this entire plot with Katili and everything should be the next Lion King movie or comic or something. It has an awesome plot, all around betrayal, drama, and love.
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Sitawi
Mar 18, 2010 3:15:00 GMT -5
Post by lj1987 on Mar 18, 2010 3:15:00 GMT -5
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